The reason that I chose to write an article about debate club is because I am a member of this club and many interesting things happen in this club. The way that I plan to find the information is during the meet that happens every week on Wednesday. I plan to ask some of the members and some of the organizers so I get a better perspective of this club. Personally, I know what this club means to me, but debating is in truth a more formal form of argument and thus is very useful in real life. Debate enables someone to present their arguments in a formal and organized fashion in which logic and reason can be used effectively. During English class we are already practicing doing debates and thus it is recognized that debates make us more educated and more rational. If more people become interested in debate, it helps them become more educated and maybe more contributing members to society. Personally, I have found that debates make people more accepting to reason. I plan to make 10 questions about their experience in debate club and try to find a correlation between how long one debates and how people are more accepting to new ideas. I plan to write my article on the effect of debate on young individuals.
-frank
I've decided to write my article about the attitude of people around the TTC. The reason is because lately I've noticed various types of people on and from my way from school. I think most people will be able to relate to this because most people have been on the TTC, with many using it often. My sources will be my peers and my own experiences. Throughout my article, I plan to list around 4 or 5 types of people I've seen. It won't be a serious article, so I may sometimes use slang - after all, the readers will be students, not teachers. I think this article will encourage students to think more about their environment.
Follow the table. Create links to your documents from "draft" so it doesn't get all cluttered. Highlight anything to be edited,
don't change it yourself. One more thing, check back often so that people will actually have things edited. Let's try and avoid the mess
we made with the first writing assignment. -Tim
-edited by Amy
I think the artical if nicely laid out but i don't think it's giving enough information, it' basically talking about the same point the whole artical through. I think it's actually quite short, although it fills the page, it's half taken up by a picture. Just a opinion.
Compilers: Singyu, Frank
Editor(s): Katherine
Criteria - Finished Article
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you should make the files .doc instead of .docx
it's better that way >-<
-Tim
Here is my article proposal……by Birunthaa....i think Michael (the other one) uploaded his and like, replaced mine...so here it is
-Edward
-Amy
-Julie
The reason that I chose to write an article about debate club is because I am a member of this club and many interesting things happen in this club. The way that I plan to find the information is during the meet that happens every week on Wednesday. I plan to ask some of the members and some of the organizers so I get a better perspective of this club. Personally, I know what this club means to me, but debating is in truth a more formal form of argument and thus is very useful in real life. Debate enables someone to present their arguments in a formal and organized fashion in which logic and reason can be used effectively. During English class we are already practicing doing debates and thus it is recognized that debates make us more educated and more rational. If more people become interested in debate, it helps them become more educated and maybe more contributing members to society. Personally, I have found that debates make people more accepting to reason. I plan to make 10 questions about their experience in debate club and try to find a correlation between how long one debates and how people are more accepting to new ideas. I plan to write my article on the effect of debate on young individuals.
-frank
- vivian
I've decided to write my article about the attitude of people around the TTC. The reason is because lately I've noticed various types of people on and from my way from school. I think most people will be able to relate to this because most people have been on the TTC, with many using it often. My sources will be my peers and my own experiences. Throughout my article, I plan to list around 4 or 5 types of people I've seen. It won't be a serious article, so I may sometimes use slang - after all, the readers will be students, not teachers. I think this article will encourage students to think more about their environment.
- Katherine
- Johnson
- Adam Winick
- ALEX wu :D
-ALLAN YUan
-Michael(the other one)
Follow the table. Create links to your documents from "draft" so it doesn't get all cluttered. Highlight anything to be edited,
don't change it yourself. One more thing, check back often so that people will actually have things edited. Let's try and avoid the mess
we made with the first writing assignment. -Tim
Do we have to include the edited doc?
-Allan
be edited
-frank
Oh my Gorsh. i uploaded the wrong thing...=.=
(finished on time, but handed in late)... stupid browsing files.
This is the finished one... D:
Not really an edit, but a comment,
personally, if you ended by saying
that you just got texted, i feel it would be stronger?
-frank
pls put in newsletter k thx bai.
-Julie
-Kevin Lee
-Kevin Lee
-not edited
-Edited
-frank
-Julie
Edited Copy:
Final final copy :D
-Tim
-Birunthaa
-Julie
Sorry! The other one was a previous draft so can someone please re-edit?
Edited Copy:
-M33k :)
Just a comment on this one, the writing style was really well done, in sort of a biographical format. Not much to change.
-SingYu
new version...
please edit?
Debate edit.doc
-Tim
@Tim, yeah i fully agree with the cocky thing but i
just couldn't think of a more appropriate ending...
-Julie
(I think "overjoyed" it pushing it a bit. Change it to "I'm glad you've...."")
-SingYu
OMGLOL I HANDED IT IN...
Where is everyone??
.doc version (converted, heard it might mess up formatting though):
Above is from Judy :o
Edited By Johnson and Edward. I can give you the hard copy of the edited draft.
Pokemon Final Copy - Edited version, couldn't find anywhere else to put this so here
-frank, some grammatical errors, otherwise rather heart-warming
-Meekcow
new draft edit this
(I just fixed some grammatical mistakes and a couple phrases, but otherwise, well done.)
-SingYu
Edit or else your a hater! your a hater... such a hater haters Everyone is such a meaner so you must edit it all of you
:Ccreeper
Note to "Compilers: Alex, Singyu, Frank and Julie :C+ Alan. (Li.)"
if no new article is posted by 12:00 night, use this one
-both edited by allan
-editted
-edited by Amy
I think the artical if nicely laid out but i don't think it's giving enough information, it' basically talking about the same point the whole artical through. I think it's actually quite short, although it fills the page, it's half taken up by a picture. Just a opinion.